Love how his shirt balloons out, wonderful narrow waist, would like to see his face (or at least the back of his head). Nice shading, and how he jumps out on the page (the background being subdued). Like how his bag is bunched up, and the black handle of his bag is around his wrist, mimicking his watch band. Just noticed the papers in his back pocket – so he is also red, white and blue!
I don't know what's turning me off but I'm really having a strong reaction to that shirt. I don't know if it's the bright red or those bold blue squares but I'm not liking it. Perhaps if it was just a stripe or the if the squares were thinner, I'd like it better.
Este hombre me resulta muy familiar. Esos calcetines multicolor y esa manera de modelas las mangas de la camisa y los bajos de los pantalones! Aseguro que su forma de caminar quita el hipo! Me encanta, aunque considero que los calcetines destacan de forma estridente en el conjunto. Genial sin los calcetines.
I'm really interested to know why you decided to cut his head off! There's definitely a reason why you thought that his head would spoil the picture or detract from the sweeping movement of his body as he passes by. I have decided that his head is totally shaved, but it amuses me to picture various hairstyles and colours on him. Be nice to know the facts, though…..